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The Valley of the Dead by ~Archemorus:iconArchemorus:



No one lives in the Valley of the Dead
No one goes in, No one comes out
no one walks in, No one crawls out
No one lives in the Valley of the Dead

The Sun sears the sands, the sands scald the Skin
Up and down, searching for no one's kin.

From dawn till dusk and dusk till dawn
You were laid to rest when you were gone

Though you spoke, you were not spoken to
Madness takes over and now speaks for you

"I'm lost with no direction, wind or water
The sun is dropping and darkness falls
Soon the moon will shine, and cold slaughter.
But as a beaten creature, still, still, I'll crawl!"

Just the next mound
Force each limb up
Then crash it down.

"Damn blisters, bites, boils and burns erupt
Finish your seething, let my body labor it's breathing,
My sweltering head, stop, stop your throb, to heat I'd lost
Yet now, it is to the cool, cold chill of nights frost
My madness now foams, mind and body roams
I know not where I am, but where I am not
Pull drag and climb up up up only up
Cracked crying hands struggle
I see the top in the dark sky
Please move, Please try
Life, breathe, no die
Don't close eye
Good nigh--"

Good Night
God Send
Goodbye
My no one friend

No one goes in the Valley of the Dead
No one lives in the Valley of the Dead
No one dies in the Valley of the Dead
For,
No one knows of the Valley of the Dead.
©2006-2010 ~Archemorus
:iconarchemorus:

Author's Comments

My best work. ^.^

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:iconsuperkorpse:
i agree, definetly your best work. Dark, lonely and brutal...i love it
:iconinuyasha1771:
I really love this archemorus..i really do :D You did such an awesome job writing it! It TOTALLY deserves a fave! :D :D Completely FREAKIN awesome ^_^ i remmeber you hshowing it to me a while ago on YIM....^,...,^

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~~ Whenever there is a beating, a parting is sure to follow. However, that parting need not last forever. ~~

"TEEEEEN I WANNA COME OVER YOUR HOOOOOOOOOOOOU--ZBZBZBBZBZBZBZBBZBTTTTTTTT"
:iconnicole85:
^^; very very nice Archy I love it ^^

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One day is passed, and you are gone now and forever...I will always remember you, I will remember how you were there for me when I needed you to be...how you were always so warm hearted when I went to visit you...you may be gone and I may not be able to s
:iconruinedplans:
I like it....

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///All will end if we stand as Stone\\\

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April 21, 2006
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